Observation 6: Peer Review Process

From my partner's comments I learned that I sometime write a sentence that only I can understand. Her comments helped me look at my paper differently and helped me add in a few details that i might have missed. I was willing to change my wording in order to help others understand the point I was trying to make. My partner had some good evidence in her paper and it was all fairly easy to understand. I found the peer review sheet helpful because i wouldn't have even noticed a few of the things that were on it. After reviewing my partners paper, I started to think that if everyone in a class read mine, they would all find something they would suggest for improvement.